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篇一:2016年高考备考高考英语满分作文赏析(背诵佳选)

2016年高考备考高考英语满分作文赏析(背诵佳选)

一. 用词准确;表达地道

【北京卷高考英语】 【试题回放】 第一节情景作文(20分)

美国中学生jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文,经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华,请给Jeff写一封信,按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。

注意:1. 信的开头已为你写好。 2.词数不少于60。

Dear Jeff,

stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.

home, so like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking in our or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun.

stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

[名师点评]

作者根据图画将文章的要点概括完整,内容充

该校请你给她写封回信,假如你是李华,美国一所友好学校准备与该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回

l 提出你喜欢的栏目。 l 简要说明理由。

1. 词数100左右。 2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。

3. 适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 4. 参考栏目:栏目—columnDear Mr. Green,

I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.

Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers,

just fond of the trendy things.

Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【名师点评】

这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现,导致了安徽省该年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章,写的的确是好,很地道的美式英语,一些词语的大胆使用,让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历,否则这么地道标准的英语,可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说:my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用,list, can't wait to 简直是perfect! 二. 非谓语动词为作文添彩

【北京卷高考英语】 【试题回放】情景作文

假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华,“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class” 注意:词数不少于60 提示词:郊区April 12 is memorable because our class had a on that day. In the of trees, we all had a sense of feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.

【名师点评】

与环保结合,立意较好。文章思路清晰,要点连贯,分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。

【试题回放】开放作文

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we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.

【名师点评】

本文是开放性作文,要求考生把握好图画内容,发散表达。考生重点要看出这个人是卷发高鼻的外国人,要体会到西式刀叉对中式食物的矛盾性。行文结构十分明晰,同时句式使用得熟练而准确。

三. 复合句为写作增色

【全国卷高考英语】 【试题回放】

假定你是李华,从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信:

1、 自我介绍;2、 祝贺苏琳生日;3、 感谢工作人员;4、 索取苏琳三岁生日照。

注意:1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。例文:

Dear Sir/Madam,

Greetings from China!

years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter watching hbirthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

in advance.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【名师点评】本文写作的内容要点如下:

1.自我介绍;2.信息来源;3.祝贺生日;4.;5.;6.合适的结尾。

达到位。文章行文活泼,感情真挚,长短句运用合理,结合了简单句和复合句

积累卡片英汉互译

好词 2.express v.表达 3.give birth to v.产生,生育

好句I’d like a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard正是你们的努力工作让苏

全国卷II】【试题回放】

写一篇文字介绍。主要内容包括:

1.地点:距白山入口处500米;

2.房间及价格:单人间(共20间),100元/天;双人间(共15间),150元/天;热水淋浴;3.餐饮:餐厅(中、西餐),咖啡厅(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池:全天免费开放; 5.欢迎预定。注意:1.词数100左右,开头语已为你写好;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.

500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides singleperson room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms,

with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!

Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.

【名师点评】

本文开门见山,首先点明了主旨。本文最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式,使文章比较出彩。开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置。which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确。总地来说,文章句式精炼,是篇不错的满分作文。

积累卡片英汉互译

好词 1. provide v.提供2. convenience n.便利

好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

very enjoyable.所有这些服务都会给你带来便利,并且非常的愉快。

评析:bring great convenience,带来便利。

【重庆卷高考英语】 【试题回放】

据报道,7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce后处于极度的痛苦之中,美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定,每当Amy3美分的治疗款。假如你是新华中学的学生李华,请你用英文给自我介绍

得知的情况

表示鼓励

打算为她做什么

祝她早日康复

注意:

1.2.

3. 词数100 4.Dear Amy,

I’m you got the lung cancer you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! I’m sure you will win. It is you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

[名师点评]

本文依照要求,涵盖了所有要点。文章使用了高中常见的句式,如I’m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等,都比较好。作者对定语从句的使用恰到好处地修饰了文章,行文自然而通顺,值得学习。

积累卡片

好词1.realize v.意识到2.promise v.允诺3.donate v.捐赠

我很遗憾地得知你身患肺癌,给你带来了巨大的痛苦。

好处:which引导限制性定语从句。

2. So, stand up and fight against the disease!

因此,坚强地与疾病做斗争吧!

好处:掷地有声,语言准确。

四. 结构清晰,句式准确

【江苏卷高考英语】 【试题回放】

2007年4月29日上午10点到11点,全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行,江苏省1,100万学生积极参与了这项活动。

教育部倡导学生:

u 每天锻炼一小时

u 健康工作五十年

u 幸福生活一辈子

请你根据以上提示,用英语准备一份发言稿, 注意:

1、 发言稿应包括以上所有信息,要有适当发挥。

2、 词数:120

3、 参考词汇:阳光体育活动—— 教育部——the Ministry of Education

Good afternoon, everyone,

The national student sports the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was 00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29,2007 in many primary and middle schools Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.

though our Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do now!

本文分为三段,前两段叙述,后一段发表观点,典型的作文结构。在句式使用上,作者用法多样,使用了独立结构和虚拟语气,十分出彩。复杂的句式是本文的特点之一。

积累卡片

好词1.wage v.发动2.aim v.瞄准3. advocate v.提倡

好句1. The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.

教育部提倡我们每天做一个小时的运动,能够健康地活50年。

评析:advocate,其后接虚拟语气,可以省略情态动词。

好句2. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.

篇二:高考英语满分作文赏析(背诵佳选)

一. 用词准确;表达地道

【北京卷】 【试题回放】 第一节情景作文(20分)

美国中学生jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文,经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华,请给Jeff写一封信,按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。

注意:1. 信的开头已为你写好。 2.词数不少于60。

Dear Jeff,

I’m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.

While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun.

If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

[名师点评]

这篇文章的特点还是比较清晰的,第一,作者根据图画将文章的要点概括完整,内容充实而丰富,结构紧凑,有层次感;第二,本文没有采用华丽的辞藻,但用词十分恰当,段落过渡自然,令人耳目一新。

【安徽卷】【试题回放】

假如你是李华,美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物,该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信,假如你是李华,美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物,该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信,主要内容如下:

l 表示赞成。 l 提出你喜欢的栏目。 l 简要说明理由。

注意: 1. 词数100左右。 2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。

3. 适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 4. 参考栏目:栏目—columnDear Mr. Green,

I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.

Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.

Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【名师点评】

这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现,导致了安徽省该年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章,写的的确是好,很地道的美式英语,一些词语的大胆使用,让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历,否则这么地道标准的英语,可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说:my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用,list, can't wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误,不管是书写还是语法。英语能够学到这种程度,不可谓不让人佩服。

二. 非谓语动词为作文添彩

【北京卷】 【试题回放】情景作文

假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华,为响应绿化祖国的号召,你班四月十二日去郊区植树,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,介绍植树活动的全过程,给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。

注意:词数不少于60 提示词:郊区 suburbs

April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.

【名师点评】

本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文,与环保结合,立意较好。文章思路清晰,要点连贯,在语言的表达上选词新颖,同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。

【北京卷】 【试题回放】开放作文

请根据下面提示,写一篇短文,词数不少于50

In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.

What an interesting picture! A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles. He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.

【名师点评】

本文是开放性作文,要求考生把握好图画内容,发散表达。考生重点要看出这个人是卷发高鼻的外国人,要体会到西式刀叉对中式食物的矛盾性。行文结构十分明晰,同时句式使用得熟练而准确。

三. 复合句为写作增色

【全国卷】 【试题回放】

假定你是李华,从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信:

1、 自我介绍;2、 祝贺苏琳生日;3、 感谢工作人员;4、 索取苏琳三岁生日照。

注意:1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。例文:

Dear Sir/Madam,

Greetings from China!

I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【名师点评】本文写作的内容要点如下:

1.自我介绍;2.信息来源;3.祝贺生日;4.感谢照顾;5.索取照片;6.合适的结尾。

这封信格式正确,行文规范,描述有条不紊,称呼、正文中的开头及结尾、结束语均表达到位。文章行文活泼,感情真挚,语言表述准确,洋溢着作者因大熊猫得到精心照顾而对美方人员的感激之情,以及希望自己愿望成真,得到照片的希冀之情。长短句运用合理,结合了简单句和复合句,流畅自然,不露痕迹,的确是一篇佳作。

积累卡片英汉互译

好词1.delighted adj.欣喜的,快乐的 2.express v.表达 3.give birth to v.产生,生育

好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

我祝福它生日快乐并且对你们的辛勤工作表达我的感激之情,正是你们的努力工作让苏琳和它的父母在美国过着幸福和健康的生活。

【全国卷II】【试题回放】

一家宾馆新开业,为吸引外国宾客,希望在互联网上进行宣传。请你用英语为其 写一篇文字介绍。主要内容包括:

1.地点:距白山入口处500米;

2.房间及价格:单人间(共20间),100元/天;双人间(共15间),150元/天;热水淋浴;3.餐饮:餐厅(中、西餐),咖啡厅(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池:全天免费开放; 5.欢迎预定。注意:1.词数100左右,开头语已为你写好;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.

500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single

which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 doubleperson room, of person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!

Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.

【名师点评】

本文开门见山,首先点明了主旨。本文最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式,使文章比较出彩。开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置。which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确。总地来说,文章句式精炼,是篇不错的满分作文。

积累卡片英汉互译

好词 1. provide v.提供2. convenience n.便利

好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

very enjoyable.所有这些服务都会给你带来便利,并且非常的愉快。

评析:bring great convenience,带来便利。

【重庆卷】 【试题回放】

据报道,7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后处于极度的痛苦之中,美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定,每当Amy收到一封慰问信,就给她增加3美分的治疗款。假如你是新华中学的学生李华,请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信,主要内容包括:自我介绍

得知的情况

表示鼓励

打算为她做什么

祝她早日康复

注意:

1. 信的格式已为你写好

2. 信中不得出现你的真实情况。

3. 词数100左右。

4. 请在答题卡上作答。

Dear Amy,

I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! I’m sure you will win. It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive. So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

[名师点评]

本文依照要求,涵盖了所有要点。文章使用了高中常见的句式,如I’m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等,都比较好。作者对定语从句的使用恰到好处地修饰了文章,行文自然而通顺,值得学习。

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好词1.realize v.意识到2.promise v.允诺3.donate v.捐赠

好句1. Im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain.我很遗憾地得知你身患肺癌,给你带来了巨大的痛苦。

好处:which引导限制性定语从句。

2. So, stand up and fight against the disease!

因此,坚强地与疾病做斗争吧!

好处:掷地有声,语言准确。

四. 结构清晰,句式准确

【江苏卷】 【试题回放】

2007年4月29日上午10点到11点,全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行,江苏省1,100万学生积极参与了这项活动。

教育部倡导学生:

u 每天锻炼一小时

u 健康工作五十年

u 幸福生活一辈子

请你根据以上提示,用英语准备一份发言稿,向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况,并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼,谈谈你的看法及理由。

注意:

1、 发言稿应包括以上所有信息,要有适当发挥。

2、 词数:120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。

3、 参考词汇:阳光体育活动——a national student sports program;

教育部——the Ministry of Education

Good afternoon, everyone,

The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10:00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29,2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.

The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.

In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records. So every one of you, join the program now!

Thank you!

【名师点评】

本文的结构十分明晰,同时句式使用得熟练而准确。本文分为三段,前两段叙述,后一段发表观点,典型的作文结构。在句式使用上,作者用法多样,使用了独立结构和虚拟语气,十分出彩。复杂的句式是本文的特点之一。

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好词1.wage v.发动2.aim v.瞄准3. advocate v.提倡

好句1. The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.

教育部提倡我们每天做一个小时的运动,能够健康地活50年。

评析:advocate,其后接虚拟语气,可以省略情态动词。

好句2. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.

如果我们不进行运动,我们的学习成绩就不会很好。

评析:虚拟语气。

篇三:2015高考英语满分作文范文及翻译

2015高考英语满分作文范文及翻译(1) 假设你叫王明,昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail,得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail,介绍学习中文的体会和方法,提出你的建议,以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。

【例文】

Dear David,

I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well.

Hope to see you soon in Beijing.

Yours,Wang Ming

【翻译】

亲爱的大卫,

我很高兴你会来北京学习中文。中国是非常有益的,许多外国人正在学习,现在。这很难为你,因为它是相当的英语不同。你要记住尽可能多的中国话。同样重要的是做一些阅读和写作。你可以看电视,听广播练习你的听力。你最好不要谈论与中国人民。你可以学习汉语,不仅从书本上,而且从你周围的人。如果您有任何问题,请问我。我敢肯定你会学好中文。

希望能尽快看到你在北京。

此致,

王明

2015高考英语满分作文范文及翻译(2)

请你根据下面的提纲,以“我的家乡”为题,写一篇100—120字的短文。提纲:

(1) 家乡的地理位置;

(2) 解放前的情况;

(3) 解放后的变化;

(4) 对家乡的感情。

【例文】

My Home Town

My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.

In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.

I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it

still richer and more beautiful.

【翻译】

我的家乡

我的家乡是一个美丽的地方。它站在旁边是一个宽阔的河流和丰富的鱼和米饭。但它是一个贫穷落后的小镇时光。许多人没有工作。他们过着艰苦的生活。

1949年我的家乡解放。自那时以来已发生很大变化那里。街道已拓宽。工厂,学校,医院,电影院和剧院便如雨后春笋,一个接一个。人民生活大大改善。

我爱我的家乡。更爱我的人。他们正在努力,以使其更丰富,还有更美丽。

2015高考英语满分作文范文及翻译(3)

健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的,但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题,你很为他们担忧。请你以此为话题,并结合提示给他们写一封信。

提示:1.要走路去上班,而不是开车或坐车;

2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次,或打球、或游泳;

3.饮食要健康;

4.不要工作太晚,要早休息。

要求:1.短文结构完整,意思连贯,语言流畅,语法准确,符合逻辑;

2.80—100词左右;

3.开头和结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数。

【例文】

Dear Dad(Mum),

You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health. I’m worried about your health all the time. I’d like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isn’t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What’s more, it’s necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better.

Dad, please accept my advice. I really wish you healthy!

Your loving son (daughter)

Tom (Mary)

【翻译】

亲爱的爸爸(妈妈),

你每天这么忙,你不重视你的健康。我对你的健康担心所有的时间。我想给你一些建议。我听到走路是最好的运动。您的公司没有远离家乡,是吗?为什么不步行到办公室吗?你最好锻炼,每周至少一次,如在健身房打网球。去游泳也是一个不错的选择了。更重要的是,它需要有健康的食物。尽量不要熬夜太晚。有足够的睡眠可以让你的大脑工作得更好。爸爸,请接受我的意见。我真的希望你健康!

您的爱子(女)

汤姆(玛丽)

2015高考英语满分作文范文及翻译(4) 【例文】

Doing sport builds up our body strength and reduces diseases.

Though we lead a better life, our health is becoming worse now. So "EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY,KEEP ILLNESS AWAY" has been raised by the government.

At noon or after school we play ball games, swimming and running. Look!The playground seems smaller because lots of students are playing on it.The school life has become colorful and we are energetic.As a result we study harder and better.

The Sunny Sports has brought an exciting change to us. Let’s keep on doing it.

【翻译】

做运动建立了我们的身体力量,减少疾病。

虽然我们过上更好的生活,我们的健康越来越差了。因此,“每天要锻炼1小时,保持因病逝世”已经提出的政府。

在中午或放学后,我们玩球,游泳和跑步。瞧!操场似乎较小,因为很多学生都在操场上后援学校生活变得丰富多彩,我们energetic.As因此我们努力学习,更好。在阳光体育运动带来了一个令人振奋的变化给我们。让我们继续这样做。

2015高考英语满分作文范文及翻译(5)

【例文】

Career or Family: which is more important?

When asked about their opinion of career and family, people always respond differently. Some people deem it more important to pursue their career, while there are always other people who argue that family should be the number one in one’s life.

It goes without any question that career plays a key role in our life. In the very first place, career can give us an aim to live on. Without career, much of our living time will be certainly wasted. What’s more, career can provide us with a means to live on. Most of the people earn their income from a job. On the other hand, family is also an indispensable part of life, as many people will admit. Family is always regarded as a place where we can escape from troubles in life. In addition, we can obtain a sense of belonging to from family. Without it, anyone will feel lonely and desperate.In my opinion, career and family are not in opposition to each other. Rather, they can enhance each other so that one’s life can become better and better. Therefore, it’s not a choice between right and wrong, but one between ideal and practical.

【翻译】

职业或家庭:哪个更重要?

在谈到自己的事业和家庭的意见要求,人总是有不同的反应。有些人认为这更重要的是追求自己的事业,而总有那么谁认为家庭应该是一个人的生活的人数1人。

毫无疑问,任何事业在我们生活中起着关键作用。在第一个地方,可以给我们一个职业生涯的目标是生活。没有职业生涯中,大部分时间我们的生活一定会被浪费。更重要的是,职业生涯可以提供一种手段,对我们的生活。大多数人从工作中赚取的收入。另一方面,家庭也是生活中不可缺少的一部分,因为很多人会承认。家庭一直被认为是一个地方,我们可

以摆脱生活中的麻烦。此外,我们可以得到一个属于家庭的感觉。没有它,人会感到孤独和绝望。

在我看来,职业和家庭是不反对对方。相反,它们可以加强彼此,使自己的生活能够越来越好。因此,它不是对与错之间的选择,但理想和现实之间的一个。

2015高考英语满分作文范文及翻译(6)

【例文】Olympics and I

Dear friend,

I have a great news to inform here. Through long efforts, Beijing has been granted the right to host 2008 Olympic games. As a resident in Beijing, I feel quite excited and like to share with you my happiness.

This success means a lot more than a game to me. In the first place, this Games will definitely promote the development of our economy. According to a recent survey by some experts, this games will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs. What’s more, our culture will be widely recognized and accepted all over the world through the Games. People will come over from every corner of the world, and experience Chinese culture in every aspect. Besides, through the games, our living environment will be greatly improved. For example, the public transportation system will be up-dated. Moreover, it’s known that more trees will be planted, and grassland will be considerably expanded.

My friend, I really look forward to the coming of this great Games. As an individual, I’m all ready to offer my help in any way I can. I also hope to invite you all to come here, and watch the games in 2008.Sincerely yours,

【翻译】

奥运与我

亲爱的朋友,

我有一个好消息,告知这里。通过长期的努力,北京已获得申办2008年奥运会。作为一个在北京居住,我感到很兴奋,你想分享我的快乐。

这一成功意味着很多超过我的游戏。首先,本届奥运会一定会促进我们的经济发展。据一些专家最近的一项调查,这项比赛将提高约3%的国内生产总值,提供职位约1.0万。更重要的是,我们的文化将得到广泛认可和接受世界各地通过奥运会。人们会走过来从世界的每一个角落,体验中华文化在各个方面。此外,透过游戏,我们的生活环境将大大改善。例如,公共交通系统会过时。此外,据了解,将种植更多树木,草地将大大扩大。

我的朋友,我真的期待着这个伟大的奥运会的到来。作为个人,我都愿意提供我的任何方式我可以提供帮助。我也希望能邀请大家来到这里,观看2008年奥运会。

此致,

敬礼

2015高考英语满分作文范文及翻译(7)

【例文】

Tourism in ChinaRecent years have seen a tendency in China that tourism is growing faster. According to a recent survey made by some experts, about 47% urban residents travel regularly, and 28% rural residents also make their tour across the country. The survey also shows that more people are interested in tourism, and will join the army in the future.

Facing this tendency, we can’t help exploring some underlying factors that are responsible. In the very first place, with the policy of reform and opening up, Chinese people’s living standard has been greatly improved, and therefore, most of them can afford to travel around. What’s more, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude to tourism, and regard it as a life style. In addition, tourism facilities are becoming better and better. For example, transportation develops fast, and many scenic spots are available now.

【译文】

中国旅游

最近几年,在中国的趋势,旅游业增长较快。根据最近的一项调查显示一些专家认为,约47%城镇居民定期作出旅行,28%的农村居民,也使他们的全国巡演。该调查还显示,更多的人在旅游有兴趣,并会在将来加入军队。

面对这一趋势,我们不能不说是负责任的开发一些潜在因素。在第一个地方,随着改革开放政策,对中国人民的生活水平有了很大提高,因此,他们大多数都不能周游。更重要的是,它相信,人们现在更积极的态度,旅游业,把它作为一种生活方式。此外,旅游设施正在变得越来越好。例如,交通运输发展迅速,许多景点都已经上市。

2015高考英语满分作文范文及翻译(8)

【例文】

What a disaster(灾难)!So far,it's reported that more than 60,000 people died in the SiChuan earthquake.What's more, millions of people there have become homeless.And they are still in the danger of illness and other difficulties. Anyway, thanks to all the kind people, in and abroad,the situation has been changing well.But we still work hard at it,especially to build houses for those homeless people and cure the injured people.

What can we do now? Besides doing our own job well,we can donate money to them.We firmly believe that with the party and the government's strong leadership, and with the people of all nationalities throughout the country to aid,this earthquake relief will be a victory!

【译文】

什么是灾难(灾难)!到目前为止,有报道称,超过60,000人在四川earthquake.What的死亡,再加上数百万人民有成为homeless.And他们在疾病和其他困难的危险之中。无论如何,感谢所有善良的人们,在国内外形势已经改变well.But我们仍然在努力工作的,特别是为那些无家可归的人建造房屋和医治受伤群众。

现在我们可以做什么?除了做好自己的工作做好,我们可以捐钱给them.We坚信,有党和政府的坚强领导,有全国各族人民的援助国,这将是一个抗震救灾的胜利


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