大学申请个人陈述

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篇一：国外大学申请个人陈述部分 personal statement

Undergraduate GPA: 3.0

LSAT: 163

Applied to Florida State University.

Accepted.

Sometimes, it takes years to discover what you are really good at; some folks know right away. You've read the statements of countless applicants who have a story about their lifelong love of law and their desire to continue the legacies of their fathers, but my story is not one of those. My story begins with a seed, a fortune cookie, which, at the time I opened it was like some kind of bad joke. "You would make a good lawyer." Living in bohemian New Orleans as a creative writing major, I cracked open my cookie, read these words, and considered it a cosmic insult. I did not recognize until years later—after having worked several years in the legislative arena—the eerie prescience of the cookie's message.

When I could no longer afford my tuition at Loyola University New Orleans, I relocated to Tallahassee, and Florida State University, in order to take advantage of the available Bright Futures money and in-state tuition. As a student in

Tallahassee, I had not spent a great deal of time considering what went on inside the gigantic Capitol building or the other bland government buildings downtown. I was a poet, trained in creative writing; however, as you may be aware, employment in the field is hard to come by, particularly in a town the size of Tallahassee, and so I accepted a position at the Clerk's Office of the Florida House after graduation. It is dumb luck that I found an available editing job, as they, too, are in short supply. I considered myself in much better shape than most of my creative writing peers, in that I was being hired into a position in which I would be encouraged—required, even!—to use one or two of the skills I had acquired in college. I was well aware that English majors often accepted the first salaried office job they were offered, regardless of what paper-pushing drudgery it represented. I was lucky.

I didn't know my editing job would turn into anything more than that. At first, I considered it a placeholder. This was 2003. The position was temporary,

scheduled to last for just one legislative session. The Master Plan was to earn that paycheck while looking for a more creative position, but as John Lennon

observed, "Life is what happens to you while you're busy making other plans." Luckily, the Florida Legislature had several special sessions in 2003, which extended my temporary position long enough for me to realize the huge opportunity I had been given and my ability to excel in the field; seeing the behind-the-scenes work that goes into producing quality legislation gave me a deep respect for the good that government can do, when enabled by capable public servants. When a higher-level position opened up, I applied. I moved fast. I was promoted repeatedly, eventually becoming the editorial supervisor in the Office of the Clerk.

My work is tedious—some might say "mundane," but I would not—and requires a meticulous and analytical mind. Supervising the production of the legal record of the Florida House, the Journal, demands attention to detail not common in most office work. I have found joy in the precision of my work, becoming

increasingly fascinated with the intricacies of legal writing and research. My mind has always been one given to curiosity and problem-solving. Crossword puzzles and word games alone once sated me; as an adult, I have grown to appreciate statutory and constitutional puzzles for their complexity and for the mere fact that there may be multiple acceptable solutions, if those solutions are argued competently. I have come to understand that one may express creativity and passion in ways that have nothing to do with art.

My creative writing skills have been put to good use in my career, however. In 2006, when Clerk [xxxxx] retired his position and the Office of the Clerk was split in two parts, my unit was moved and housed under the newly created Office of the Parliamentarian. The loss of Mr. [xxxxx]'s leadership was a strain on the office; however, my new work situation created another opportunity for me. My new direct supervisor, Parliamentarian [yyyyyyy], recognized and employed my ability to communicate ideas effectively. He allowed me to participate heavily in the writing of several publications. The most daunting of these is Principles, Practices & Priorities: A Handbook on Parliamentary Practice in the Florida House of Representatives, which explores not only the practices of the

Legislature, but also the intersections the Legislature must necessarily have with the other branches of Florida's government. The project required extensive research and fact-checking, in addition to writing and editing, and through this process, I expanded my understanding and appreciation of the Florida

Constitution. Completion of the Principles book was pivotal for my professional career, because the research I did in order to flesh out this book revealed my desire to participate more fully in the process of government. While I had begun my career with the Florida House in 2003 as a recent college graduate just trying to get a paycheck and blend in, by 2006, a larger picture had started to emerge and I began to see myself as a valuable part of that picture.

The study of law represents a three-way intersection at which the executive, judicial, and legislative branches of government meet; I am drawn to this convergence. To better understand the work I have been doing for the past six years, I must approach this work from a different angle. Where I sit, at my desk, I can see some things that a law student might not see: I am involved in and understand the engrossing of amendments into bills, my grasp of parliamentary practice is sound, I have a deep respect for the necessity of preserving official documents and records, I have direct experience working with others in an office setting. But these qualities do not give me a complete view of how law works. I can see how a bill is perfected over time and I can evaluate the arguments of those who have interest in the bill, but I cannot intimately understand how the statute enacted in the bill might impact the real world. Such understanding is vital if one is to even consider drafting a bill. Repeatedly, the Representatives who impress me with their grasp of the effects and consequences of new laws (or changes to laws) are those who are attorneys or who have studied law. Yes, a Representative who is a farmer is likely to understand the effects of a bill relating to agriculture; however, a Representative who is an attorney has a broader picture than others, because he or she has had direct interaction with the laws previous Legislatures have enacted. I seek a broad philosophical understanding of how laws interact with one another and how, through their interpretation in courts,

govern a society.

I am applying for admission to the Florida State University College of Law in order to gain the formal training required to practice law in the state of Florida in the service of the public. I believe my background and experiences make me a competitive candidate, particularly when compared to more recent college graduates. My work experience has given me a solid foundation upon which to build. I am intimately acquainted with long hours and difficult work; legislative sessions are quite demanding, often requiring that I work many 16-hour days consecutively. I have achieved a high level of personal confidence by producing quality work on a consistent basis and have developed the maturity and focus required of a successful first-year law student. Additionally, my experience in writing, editing, and managing the production of publications has caused me to value precise language as an effective communication tool. I urge you to take these unique qualities into consideration when determining the makeup of your 2009 first-year class.

I am not superstitious nor do I believe a fortune cookie has the power to predict or determine the future. An idea: You would make a good lawyer. It is a seed that I am asking you to let grow. I will do the work. I need you to allow me to plant the seed.

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Shaggier1Post subject: Re: Personal Statement Samples

Posted: Fri Jul 24, 2009 1:22 pm

Worldtraveler: Fantastic personal statement. One of the more moving,

substantive essays I have ever seen. Congrats on your great

acceptances and good luck in LS.

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HariboPost subject: Re: Personal Statement Samples

Posted: Thu Aug 13, 2009 3:27 pm

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In: Harvard, Stanford (attending), Columbia, Chicago, Berkeley, Michigan, Georgetown

Out: Nowhere!

A lot of my acceptance letters commented on my personal statement; re-reading it I think there are some problems, but it served its purpose. I don't think this is the final-final draft, so there may be a grammatical error or two.

Maria Teresa was stirring a copper vat full of boiling, light-yellow cream. A sweet-smelling steam obscured her face as she explained how to heat goat milk to make cajeta, a traditional Mexican caramel. While outlining the recipe, passed down from her great-grandmother, she hinted at her aching back and the many hours she spends in the kitchen. Still, her face was radiant when she spoke of adding rum or vanilla to those century-old recipes to subtly change the flavor. In her words, I heard a refrain later repeated by other candy-makers I would interview around the globe: success requires hard work and a willingness to take risks and tweak traditional recipes for new and innovative results.

Over the past ten years, I've demonstrated these same values. At MIT and in the workplace, hard work and the ability to surmount obstacles, to think through problems, and to develop solutions are mandatory. In college, whether waking up at "Oh-dark-thirty" for Air Force officer training courses or staying up all night to program a ball-gathering robot, there was never enough time. Struggling to understand was normal - thermodynamics, my kryptonite. One dropped class, two years, and many late nights spent finishing problem sets eventually led to success in a subject I thought I would never understand.

These lessons served me well later, when the pressure was intense to design, program, test and certify an operating system for the next generation of general aviation cockpit displays. Avionics software development is a bit of a tightrope walk. On one hand, you must upgrade the code to meet new requirements. On the other, every change must be weighed with the corresponding expense of

certification, a costly process required by the FAA to ensure all critical aircraft software is safe. Every day, I made decisions that set this balance. Despite the challenge, I was not happy. As a woman I found the atmosphere difficult. In nearly four years, I worked with another female engineer only twice. I wasn't marginalized, but I was isolated.Joined: Tue Sep 04, 2007 10:47 pm Posts: 1528

With no one to turn to for advice on balancing life and career and left out of many male-only bonding experiences, the aerospace industry was not a permanent option.

In spite of these misgivings, my decision to leave a secure job to travel was unexpected to many people. Engineers are taught to abhor risk and to design and test it away, instead aiming for stability and safety. Yet, I left for 18 months of uncertainty. Something I’d dreamed of became possible when a documentary film-maker chose to sponsor me on my travels. My entry was selected from hundreds in an

combination essay/interview competition because my reasons for travel – to learn all that I can of the history, production, and consumption of candy internationally – were interesting and

innovative and above all, unique. My earliest memories include trying chewing gum for the first time and starting up an elementary school candy business; the memory of boot camp that has remained most intensely alive to me is the sweetness of an ice cream sandwich after weeks without sugar. I travel not just to see new sights and meet new people, but also to explore a fascinating, delicious, and at times unsettling aspect of human history. From the use of slave labor in sugar cultivation to international corporations forcing the closure of local businesses and pushing eating habits that lead to diabetes and tooth decay, candy can have an unsavory core. However, it can also bring comfort and celebration, no matter where we are. This balance of the good and the bad has long been part of the history of candy.

While traveling, I focus on writing and on viewing what I see with a reporter’s eye. I will have covered more than thirty countries by the time the trip is over, and each day brings forth something new to

explore. In Belize, I made chocolate from the seeds of the cacao plant, grinding the beans by hand and roasting them on a roaring fire. Seeing Chinese and American imports crowding traditional Nicaraguan sweets out of the market led me to a deeper understanding of the effects of globalization on candy markets. In Mexico, the impact of Spanish convents on the development of candy mirrors the more

obvious colonial influences of the past 500 years. Studying sweets has given intellectual depth to my travels and a more humanistic way of looking at the world after nine years as an engineer. Additionally, with solo, low-budget, independent travel comes patience, a valuable global perspective, and the knowledge that risks and innovation can pay off in big ways.

Perhaps it is silly to compare the experiences of candy-makers with a future law student's. Still, success in any endeavor is usually brought about by a combination of hard work, craftsmanship, and finding the right balance between what has worked in the past and what should be changed for the future. The law is no different. With my background in engineering and software development and a long-standing interest in the impact of technology, Internet law is a natural fit. The laws in

篇二：一份好的个人陈述可以帮助说服对方录取你

一份好的个人陈述可以帮助说服对方录取你，因此是申请的重要部分。它给你机会告诉高校为什么应该录取你。招生负责人希望了解你对所选课程感兴趣，以及你的热情和投入。推荐信同样也是申请的关键部分。没有推荐人的完整资料和推荐信，对方不会处理你的申请，且不接受家庭成员及朋友的推荐信。

如何提高自己申请的命中率？招办人员的建议是，申请者应尽早对申请专业和学校进行研究，尽量选择适合自己基本条件相符的专业和学校。既要对期望学习的专业和学校有深入研究，更要对其录取资格和条件有全面了解。英国留学申请：写个人陈述时如何找亮点 (2010-11-04 18:22:34)

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Personal Statement(个人陈述，简称PS)的写作是英国留学申请当中技术含量较高的一环，要到位地描述自己是一件很难的事情。

艾迪英国留学（/uk）专家表示，很多英国大学无需面试申请人，他们唯一认识学生的地方就是UCAS form(英国大学网上申请表格)。大部分表格涵盖了个人信息，包括大学感兴趣的学术/语言成绩、推荐信以及PS。

这是给大学招生办留下一个良好印象的机会。尤其是当申请学校竞争特别激烈时，PS是唯一能凸显与众不同的材料。

艾迪英国留学专家表示，在PS写作中标注自己的亮点就尤为重要。在开始思考文章框架和行文结构之前首先需要仔细思考PS里要写些什么。最好的方式是使用一系列的标题并在该标题之下写一些与之相关的亮点。以下是可供思考的主题：

你在大学里想学什么

指出这个课程里你感兴趣的方面

你已经完成的课程

你读过的和专业相关的东西

在这个领域你的工作或志愿者经历

什么个人经历让你选择这个专业

你希望这个学位对你的影响

能够显示你是一个可靠负责的人的经历

你曾参加过的课外兼职

你做过哪些社区工作和慈善工作

你的兴趣和技能

空闲时间你喜欢干什么

你学过的没有考试的学科

你会演奏的乐器

在你的兴趣里，你获得的奖项或成就

将这些问题的答案详细记录下来，就会有一系列的关于自己亮点的素材，这些素材在PS写作当中都非常有价值。

艾迪英国留学专家表示，上面清单提到的要点里如果都没有素材也不要担心，只要仔细去思考曾经做过的哪些事情可以很好地表现优秀品质。最重要的是需要有一个明确的足够有说服力的理由去申请课程，即使那些理由现在听起来有些不切实际。

本文作者：艾迪留学英国文案师韩宇

学生申请英国留学，在文书写作中，个人陈述（Personal Statement，PS）是学生申请的关键材料。如何写好PS，以帮助学生申请到理想大学，也是艾迪顾问琢磨的问题。通过与大学的沟通和成功申请名校的经验，我总结出以下心得：

我们的学生一般都喜欢写一些个人的故事，关于自己学习研究方面的内容，则常放在简历里面。这也是英语国家的人对Personal Statement的理解造成的。但是我们在任何时候

都不要忘了Personal Statement的本义。所谓Personal，顾名思义，就是要求申请者写出自己的个性或者是个人特色来。作为申请材料的重中之重，申请者的任务就是要通过这一份文件反映出自己的个性。

要想写出一篇具有个性化的PS需要一定的方法。在我看来应该分成如下几个步骤：第一步是Reflection (反思)。所谓反思，就是回顾自己的整个人生经历或者学习生涯，比如从小学、高中、大学直到现在(一般来说，PS只要写出自己大学阶段的经历就可以了)，自己有哪些与众不同之处。反思的目的就是要找出自己身上的闪光点――比如说有什么特殊的兴趣或者是独特的经历，自己有哪些比较独特的个性等等。在一篇PS中，一定要写出自己的个性和特色来，只有这样，你才会在众多的申请材料中脱颖而出，让对方教授一下子记住你，然后在集体讨论时推荐你。切记：独特性是写作PS的生命。

第二步是Positioning (定位)。所谓定位，具体在一篇PS里，就是申请者如何在经过第一阶段的反思之后确定自己独特而鲜明的个人形象。我们可以用市场上销售的轿车来说明这个问题。比如说本田，在国外一般是中产阶级开的；宝马则被定位为高档车，一般适用于比较有钱的专业人士，如律师或者医生；奔驰则定位于那种更有钱的企业老板。准确的市场定位有助于市场细分，从而更成功的销售汽车。同样，定位对于成功地进行PS写作也是至关重要的，它有助于根据自己的性别、年龄、所学专业来进行材料的选择。例如，如果你是个三十多岁的男性，打算去读博士，你写的东西就要更稳重一些，更多的侧重自己的科研能力、团队精神等等。假如你是个二十多岁的小女孩，刚刚大学毕业，学的是文科(美国、加拿大的文科院校一般都希望申请者来自不同的专业)，在这种情况下，如果你再卖力地突出自己优异的专业成绩就没必要了。这时你可以多写一些个人的东西。比如说表现一下自己的潜在才能，抒发自己的理想和抱负等等。有的人会认为这种类型的写作为“煽情”式写作，其实不是煽情，而应该说更具个性化。

第三步是Choosing a theme(确立文章的主题)。象文学作品写作一样，PS写作的主题应该准确鲜明，切忌主题不清，东一榔头西一棒子的瞎侃。这样的结果只会让读者如坠雾中，不知所云。目前我国许多申请者的写作常常是没有主题。正如我在前面所说，他们误以为写自述都应该遵照一个套路。即第一段是写自己的学习情况，第二段是写自己的课外生活，第三段则写自己如何要为建设祖国奋斗云云，几个部分之间没有一个有机的联系。很多申请者把各个部分都用黑体字，大标题分开。这些标题也通常是那种令人苦笑不得的豪言壮语，而且千篇一律。常见的有To rise where you have fallen (在哪跌倒就在哪爬起来)，Believe in yourself。You can do it。(相信自己，你能做到)。这是幼儿园小学的水平，青年知识分子不应该总是把这些口号抄来抄去。

以上是我在写PS的一点心得，希望能对大家在申请学校写PS时起到帮助作用，如有任何疑可随时咨询艾迪英国部：010-67080808

个人陈述要考虑的要点

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解释你为何申请此课程。

如果你提到了个人兴趣与爱好，试着与课程所需的技巧与经历联系起来。

个人陈述将会作为你在面试时的依据，因此要做好回答相关问题的准备。在导师做决定之前，这是他会看到的你唯一的书面工作，因此，请确保此部分条理清晰，语言流利。语法、拼写、标点正确。频频出现错误的个人陈述会使人对你的能力及你所为之付出的努力产生负面印象。你的陈述须用英语书写（或者是威尔士语，如果你申请的是威尔士的学校）。诺丁汉大学的招生主管说：“这些形式的能力是学校对在该教育水平上的申请者的基本要求。错误标点、拼写、语法会给读者极坏的印象，对一些课程，比如英语，这些技能是至关重要的。”

对自己进行描述可能不是你常会做的事情，因此，你可能需要对这种类型的写作进行练习。你可先列出自己的爱好和成就，然后再来决定它们中的哪一项能够显示你的最强的技能及个性。

申请复合课程

记住，你只需要写一篇个人陈述，它将会用于你所有的学校选择。即使你只申请了一个学校，也尽量避免提到你所申请学校的名字，因为如果你稍后要申请其他学校，你的个人陈述也不能更改。

如果你申请的是联合学位，你需要解释为何对此联合课程的各个方面感兴趣;

如果你申请的是不同学科或课程，你需要将你的选择与他们共同的主题和所要求的能力联系起来。例如，数学和法律都要求你有逻辑地思考并且实践一些规则。你对此两门课程感兴趣可能是因为你喜欢解决问题，利用理论和人文或自然法则来得出正确的结论。

如果你选择的课程不能够通过共同的主题相联，可以先思考一下你为何申请这样的多样的课程-询问一下职业规划师的建议或许会有帮助。

如果你在个人陈述中提到了一门课程却申请了其他的课程，你的学校会询问你为何选择了另外的课程。

之后申请其他的选择

如果在提交申请之后，你又想申请其他的选择（例如你添加了一个选择，，或者是通过Extra或Clearing申请），你原来的个人陈述已经发送到学校，你可以询问学校是否接受经过修正过的陈述，如果他们同意，你可以再重新发送一份给他们。

注意事项

有的陈述以名言开头，有的包含笑话，有的组织得很不寻常以引人注意，有时会奏效，但有时与你所希望的恰恰相反，招生决策者或许不会欣赏你的幽默感，因此当你想让自己的陈述引人注意时要谨慎。

写作要自然你会写下列的哪个例子？

a）客观的想法使我意识到这并不是史无前例的。

b）我发现这经常发生

这不是个很严肃的例子，但是显示了好的写作通常都十分简洁，当你在写作时有字数限制时这会非常有用。

在你的个人陈述中，你需要将意思表达得清楚简洁明了，你可以将句子字数控制在12-20之间，用英语或者威尔士语来书写。避免听上去过于口语化或过于正式，尽量使你的信息清楚

易懂。核对每个句子，增添新的内容，注意不要仅仅增加字数，而要增加有价值的内容。你的写作质量反应了你的思考能力，显示了你的强项以及你可将它们清楚地列出。使用你所熟悉的单词，更容易使读者理解，你可以想象你与他们面对面在交谈。另外，通过大声阅读你的陈述，可以发现其中的不足之处。

英国留学申请社会学专业个人陈述范文(一)

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赴英国留学就读社会学专业的学生日益增多。在英国留学申请过程中，个人陈述PS时候非常关键的一项申请材料。下面给英国留学申请人准备了一些申请英国大学社会学专业的过来人写的个人陈述的范文，希望对大家的英国留学申请有所帮助。留学e网为英国留学的学生整理个留学文书写作指导及模板，包括了个人陈述、推荐信和简历等，申请人可以直接下载范文进行参考。下载地址：

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Sociology personal statement

Society’s dynamics affect every aspect of our lives, from the seemingly trivial to those of utmost importance. Sociology is vital as it helps to inform politics with the latest trends in crime, poverty, education and culture determining government policy, therefore, sociology becomes integral to my life completely. The essential nature of sociology means I feel a powerful urge to study it more.

Marxism, as a key perspective, when discussing the application of sociology in our society, has appealed to me in realising the ways in which a particular social institution acts or is used to benefit capitalism. The recognition that capitalism is used to create an ideological state has inspired me to research further the idea that? “Capital is dead labour, which, vampire-like, lives only by sucking living labour, and lives the more, the more labour it sucks.” What interests me in studying this subject is the idea that other perspectives will influence my thinking, as I don’t have fixed ideals, but am keen to absorb many.

I have enjoyed Methodologies particularly researchers such as Milgram and his study of obedience, James Patrick, a ‘Glasgow gang observed’ and Lord Humphrey’s ‘tearoom trade’. These studies have inspired me to generate my own research in order to discover the latest trends and patterns in modern society associated with a capitalist perspective. Although producing a piece of primary data is difficult, especially due to time and cost, the determination of finding the empirical evidence drives me to success.

篇三：申请美国大学个人陈述书怎么写

申请美国大学个人陈述书怎么写？

时间:2009-10-11 12:45 作者:Slang Freak 点击: 558次

在美国申请入学的过程中，个人陈述书或读书计划是很重要的一环。这个文件主要是让学校了解申请人的学历和经历。对国际学生而言，个人陈述书考验的不仅是英语写作，还有怎么向学校呈现自己的能力。

*个人陈述书是向学校展现自我的机会*

个人陈述书是美国申请入学的必备文件之一。大学本科阶段的申请，通常以问答方式请申请人按题回答，研究生院则多由申请人自由发挥。个人陈述书的内容包括申请人的价值观、人生规划、或申请动机等等。

美国全国大学升学顾问协会主席威廉.麦克林蒂克指出，个人陈述书能让学校认识学生在学校课业和考试成绩以外的表现。麦克林蒂克说：“个人陈述书是介绍学生的素养和学历的好机会，但更重要的是谈论他们的学术兴趣从何而来，以及他们希望在美国期间取得什么成就。学校对个人陈述书的要求，实际上在申请入学中是非常重要的一环。而这也是学生展现写作能力的好机会。许多学校会想要确认学生有足以应付美国体系的写作能力。”

*个人陈述书常见的问题：过于笼统 *

麦克林蒂克分析了国际学生写作个人陈述书时常见的问题。除了语法错误，学生经常犯的毛病是过于笼统。麦克林蒂克说：“通常是语法。有时候也有过度简化的倾向。很多时候，学生会说‘我想念哈佛大学，因为它是全世界最有名的大学’，但他却没有具体说明希望读哪个专业或他们兴趣是什么，得以显示哈佛对他来说是最合适的学校。学生的通病是只说他们想去某所学校是因为学校有名或学校的地点好。”

就学校的立场，究竟想从个人陈述书知道什么？马里兰大学研究生院院长查尔斯.卡拉梅洛强调：“你想要了解学生的计划、学生的目标、学生为何选择这所学校和这个课程。如果学生希望跟某一位教授做研究，他们应该说明这位教授是谁。换句话说，愈具体愈好。”

卡拉梅洛进一步解释到：“一定要直接针对学校和项目，因为研究生院的申请入学审查大部分是在项目层级完成的，而本科的申请入学是在校园层级。”

*勿抄袭和复制针对不同学校撰写*

写作个人陈述书时另一个常见的问题是抄袭，以及将个人陈述书像广告信一样大量复制、大量寄发。市面上有许多网站及书籍提供个人陈述书范本，不少申请人会直接将把这些范本充当自己的。实际上，校方每年阅读数千份个人陈述书，很容易就能分辨是不是抄袭来的。卡拉梅洛有多年的审查申请入学的经验，他指出：“最糟的是收到一封同时寄到十所不同学校的信或电子邮件。这很容易就看得出来。根本没有人会重视这种信。”

卡拉梅洛提醒，申请人要避免“一视同仁”，将个人陈述书一字不改就寄发给所有学校的偷懒作法，是不会得到学校青睐的。想要增加录取机率，一定要多下功夫研究每一所学校和项目的特色。

而威廉.麦克林蒂克认为，申请人在个人陈述书中谈到未来规划的时候，回去报效国家应该会是比较好的作法。他说：“许多美国大学会希望学生将来回到中国，参与中国正发生的变化。我想许多美国大学会希望有更多校友能参与中国崛起的领导地位和变化。”

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