篇一：2016高考作文评析
2016 高考英语书面表达评析
假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photograph club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括：
1.主题：环境保护; 2. 展览时间； 3. 投稿邮箱： 注意：
1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
一、 试题分析
本文属于半开放作文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友Peter写信，建议他参加你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）举办的国际中学摄影展。文章要使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点如下：
1. 校摄影俱乐部举办的国际中学生摄影展，主题为环境保护；
2. 展览时间6月15日，持续三周；
3. 知道对方对摄影很感兴趣，也恰好有环保方面的图片，希望对方能够参加本
次展览。
4. 投稿邮箱：
在写作时，注意书信的格式以及串联过渡用语；同时尽量使用熟悉的词汇及短语，尤其注意不要出现中国式英语，并在力所能及的范围之内使用复合句或者谚语，增加获得高分的可能性。
二、 写作指导 (如何烹饪一道大菜)
秘笈一：精选准确的词汇（根据评审老师的口味精心挑选上等的优质食材） 国际 __________ 展览 _________ __________
作品 __________ 环境保护 __________ __________ 主题 __________
秘笈二：打造精美的句式 (好的菜肴讲究色香味型，好的大厨须掌握好火候，油温以及营养搭配…)
开头第一段：
1. I’m delighted to tell you that the International Photo Show held y my school’s
photography club is around the corner.
2. Our school photography club will hold an International High School Photography
Show, which makes me very happy.
3. I’ll tell you something interesting that our school photography club will hold an
International High School Photography Show.
4. Not until the next Friday will we hold this exhibition.
第二段：
1. Having been exposed to photography for many years, I believe you’ll be
interested in this photography show.
2. On the one hand, the show can make people reflect on their own actions. On the
other hand, we can learn more about the skills of photography.
3. With the development of society, more and more people become aware of the importance of environment. So there is no doubt that the exhibition is very important. I’m fully convinced that it will raise public awareness of environmental protection.
4. Knowing that you are aimed at being a professional photographer, I bring a good news to you.
5. As we know, with the development of industry, the environment is becoming worse and worse. We want to hold this activity to make people aware of environmental problems.
6. As we all know, the problem of environment is the inevitable(不可避免的) result of social development.
7. It is such a serious social problem that we should pay more attention to it.
8. It goes without saying that you are interested in taking photos.
9. First，the key idea is protecting the environment, which means that there is a wide range of choices open to you about it.
10. What I really hope is that you can offer your photos to this show.
9. My gratitude will be beyond description if you offer some photos about this show.
10. What you should do can be listed as follows.
秘笈三：架设错落有致的结构 (菜品视觉美可使食者舌底生津，增加味觉感受；味觉感受好，反过来更深化食者的审美感受，所以摆盘是大厨的必杀技
)
第一层次（首先）First，Firstly，In the first place, Fist of all, To begin with, For one thing
第二层次 (其次) Second, Secondly, In the second place, Next, Then, For another 第三层次 (第三点) Third, Thirdly, Besides, In addition, Furthermore, What’s more important, Moreover
最后一点 At last, Finally, In the last place, Last but not the least
三、 范文1
Dear Peter,
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last three weeks. Any student who is interested in is welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you’ve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme last time you visited our school. Opportunities are given to those who are prepared. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them.
If you want to join, you can send your photos to Hope to hear from you soon.
范文2
Dear Peter,
There are still many problems of environmental protection in recent years. As there is lack of pictures, I hope you can provide some high quality photos. You can send them to intlphotoshow @gmschool.com.
Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerelyLi Hua
范文3
Dear Peter,
The International Photography Exhibition about protecting environment will be held in our school.
Recently, some people ignore the fact that our earth is getting worse and worse. Not only did they cut down plenty of trees, but also they threw litters here I would appreciate it if you can provide some photos for me. We will hold the exhibition next Monday, so please send the photos to intlphotoshow @gmschool.com as soon as possible.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
LiHua
篇二：2016高考英语书面表达 题目
假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）.
注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。
Dear MS Jenkins,
I’m Li Hua from English writing class last lesson. I’m writing to ask for your help. I’m applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, I am not quite sure of the language and the format I’ve used. I know you have a very busy schedule, but I’d be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment.
Thank you for your kindness!
Yours,
Li Hua
全国卷2
假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括：
1．主题：环境保护；
2．展览时间；
3．投稿邮箱：.
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last for three weeks. Any student who is interested is welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you’ve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you should me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good change for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to .
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示歉意；
2.说明原因；
3.另约时间。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Yours,
Li Hua
四川卷
某中学生英文报正举办“The Season I Like Best”的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 你最喜欢的季节；
2. 你喜欢该季节的两条理由（如：气候、景色、活动、感受??）。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好；
3. 行文连贯，语篇完整；
4. 文中不得透露个人真实信息。
天津卷
假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。
（1） 回顾双方的交流活动（如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面）；
（2） 谈谈收获或感情；
（3） 表达祝愿语期望。
（1） 词数不少于100；
（2） 可适当加入细节，是内容充实、行文连贯；
（3） 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
Thank you.
浙江卷
“Planning is good ,but doing is better”是一句英国名言。请以此为题目用英语写一篇100-120词的短文。
要求如下：
1.简述你对这句名言的理解；
2.用一个具体事例加以说明；
3.给出恰当的结尾。
注意：1.文章的标题已给出（不计词数）：
2.文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定。
Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better
Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do.However,a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.
My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point.A month before the event,I Spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps.After that,I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic,wrote a speech,and practiced its delivery in beautiful prounnciation with good public speech skills.I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.
I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.
江苏卷
请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章、
In recent years, internet voting has become increasing popular in China. People not only can use part-time votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competition like the “most beautiful reaches” and the “Cutest Baby”.
Li Ping, a high school student, is invited to vote in the “Best Police Officer” competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers’ hardly work, Li Ping visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.
Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “Future Singer” competition. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.
(写作内容)
1. 用约30个单词写出上文概要；2. 用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的理由。 （写作要求）
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 不必写标题。
北京卷
第四部分：书面表达（共两节，35 分）
第一节（15分）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：学科&网
1. 该人物是谁；
2. 该人物的主要贡献；
3. 该人物对你的影响。
注意：
1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
第二节 （ 20 分）
假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。
注意：词数不少于60。提示词：地球日Earth Day
篇三：2008-2016全国卷书面表达真题及范文
2008-2016全国卷书面表达真题及范文
1.（2016全国卷I）书面表达：
假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）. 注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I am Li Hua from your English writing class last term. I’m writing to ask for your help.
I am applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, I am not quite sure of the language and the format I’ve used. I know you have a very busy schedule, but I’d be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment.
Thank you for your kindness!
Yours, Li Hua
2.（2016全国卷II）书面表达：
假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括：
1．主题：环境保护； 2．展览时间；
3．投稿邮箱：[email protected]. 注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last for three weeks. Any student who is interested in photography is welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to [email protected].
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
3.(2015全国卷I) 书面表达
假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下： 1. 栏目介绍。 2. 稿件内容；
3. 稿件长度：约400词汇4. 交稿日期：6月28日前天 注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的； 3. 开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States?
And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours, Li Hua
4.(2015 全国卷 II) 书面表达：
假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人们过重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：1.出发及返回时间；
2.活动： 包饺子、表演节目等。注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.结语已为你写好。
Dear Lucy,
I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.
It is the day for the elderly in our culture. We’ll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon.
If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Li Hua
5.（2014全国卷I）书面表达：
假定你是李华，计划暑假间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容）。 注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3．参考词汇：住宿 accommodation
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. I’ve seen your ad, and I’d like to know something more about your six-week English course. First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week?
Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. Would there be a host family or university dormitory?
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
6.（2014全国卷 II）书面表达：
一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”、请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文：
1、 家庭2、 工作
3、 业余生活
注意：1、次数100左右；
2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life
will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child. I hope I’ll work in a computer company as a program designer.
I’ll enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I’ll do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I’ll continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I’ ll travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful. 7. (2013年全国卷I) 书面表达
假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。 信中还需说明：
李明：高个子，戴眼镜航班号：CA985到达：8月6日上午11:30 注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.
Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is the first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance!
His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am. August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in blue jacket. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Li Hua
8.（2013全国卷 II）书面表达：
假定你是李华，自制一些中国结（Chinese knot）。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信，请他代卖，要点包括：
1.外观（尺寸、颜色、材料） 2.象征意义 3.价格
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头语已为你写好。
Dear Tom,
How are you doing? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5
inches long and 4 inches wide. In China, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck.
People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99 US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also, do let me know if you need further information. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
9.（2012全国卷I）书面表达：
假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括：
I.自我介绍(包括英语能力);
2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家); 3.希望获准. 注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and I’d like to take part in it.
I’ve been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What’s more, I’ll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.
Looking forward to your reply! Regards,
Li Hua
10.（2012年全国卷II) 书面表达
假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加，要点包括：
⒈ 时间：周五晚8点至9点 ⒉ 地点：学生俱乐部
⒊ 内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等 ⒋ 要求：备小礼物
注意：⒈ 词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；
⒉可以适当增加细节。
Hi, Susan,
We’re throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming’s birthday. We’d like to invite you to the party. We want to give him a surprise, so please keep quiet about it. We’ll gather at the Students’ Club at 8 p.m. this Friday,
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