篇一：2016高考作文评析
2016 高考英语书面表达评析
假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photograph club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括：
1.主题：环境保护; 2. 展览时间； 3. 投稿邮箱： 注意：
1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
一、 试题分析
本文属于半开放作文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友Peter写信，建议他参加你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）举办的国际中学摄影展。文章要使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点如下：
1. 校摄影俱乐部举办的国际中学生摄影展，主题为环境保护；
2. 展览时间6月15日，持续三周；
3. 知道对方对摄影很感兴趣，也恰好有环保方面的图片，希望对方能够参加本
次展览。
4. 投稿邮箱：
在写作时，注意书信的格式以及串联过渡用语；同时尽量使用熟悉的词汇及短语，尤其注意不要出现中国式英语，并在力所能及的范围之内使用复合句或者谚语，增加获得高分的可能性。
二、 写作指导 (如何烹饪一道大菜)
秘笈一：精选准确的词汇（根据评审老师的口味精心挑选上等的优质食材） 国际 __________ 展览 _________ __________
作品 __________ 环境保护 __________ __________ 主题 __________
秘笈二：打造精美的句式 (好的菜肴讲究色香味型，好的大厨须掌握好火候，油温以及营养搭配…)
开头第一段：
1. I’m delighted to tell you that the International Photo Show held y my school’s
photography club is around the corner.
2. Our school photography club will hold an International High School Photography
Show, which makes me very happy.
3. I’ll tell you something interesting that our school photography club will hold an
International High School Photography Show.
4. Not until the next Friday will we hold this exhibition.
第二段：
1. Having been exposed to photography for many years, I believe you’ll be
interested in this photography show.
2. On the one hand, the show can make people reflect on their own actions. On the
other hand, we can learn more about the skills of photography.
3. With the development of society, more and more people become aware of the importance of environment. So there is no doubt that the exhibition is very important. I’m fully convinced that it will raise public awareness of environmental protection.
4. Knowing that you are aimed at being a professional photographer, I bring a good news to you.
5. As we know, with the development of industry, the environment is becoming worse and worse. We want to hold this activity to make people aware of environmental problems.
6. As we all know, the problem of environment is the inevitable(不可避免的) result of social development.
7. It is such a serious social problem that we should pay more attention to it.
8. It goes without saying that you are interested in taking photos.
9. First，the key idea is protecting the environment, which means that there is a wide range of choices open to you about it.
10. What I really hope is that you can offer your photos to this show.
9. My gratitude will be beyond description if you offer some photos about this show.
10. What you should do can be listed as follows.
秘笈三：架设错落有致的结构 (菜品视觉美可使食者舌底生津，增加味觉感受；味觉感受好，反过来更深化食者的审美感受，所以摆盘是大厨的必杀技
)
第一层次（首先）First，Firstly，In the first place, Fist of all, To begin with, For one thing
第二层次 (其次) Second, Secondly, In the second place, Next, Then, For another 第三层次 (第三点) Third, Thirdly, Besides, In addition, Furthermore, What’s more important, Moreover
最后一点 At last, Finally, In the last place, Last but not the least
三、 范文1
Dear Peter,
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last three weeks. Any student who is interested in is welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you’ve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme last time you visited our school. Opportunities are given to those who are prepared. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them.
If you want to join, you can send your photos to Hope to hear from you soon.
范文2
Dear Peter,
There are still many problems of environmental protection in recent years. As there is lack of pictures, I hope you can provide some high quality photos. You can send them to intlphotoshow @gmschool.com.
Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerelyLi Hua
范文3
Dear Peter,
The International Photography Exhibition about protecting environment will be held in our school.
Recently, some people ignore the fact that our earth is getting worse and worse. Not only did they cut down plenty of trees, but also they threw litters here I would appreciate it if you can provide some photos for me. We will hold the exhibition next Monday, so please send the photos to intlphotoshow @gmschool.com as soon as possible.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
LiHua
篇二：高考英语总复习—Section 17 书面表达
Section 17 书面表达
?提纲类
【写作指导】
提纲类作文是近年高考书面表达的热点题型。它往往以列要点或用表格的形式呈现给考生相关信息，通常有较多的文字说明，对考生需要表达的内容有明确的要求和一定的限制。考查形式有书信、报道、通知、日记、发言稿、对某人或某物的介绍、欢迎词等。这就要求考生在动笔之前，应该认真审题，弄清楚题目与提纲之间的关系及文章内容与提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的中心思想及各个段落的中心思想，提炼出完美的段落主题句，保证段落中的内容能够充分展开并且符合题意。
【写作步骤】
1．仔细审题，明确要求。
审读所给信息，弄清楚所要表达的内容要点，然后对所给的信息进行梳理，可根据内容要点适当调整写作顺序，使文章行文连贯。
2．列全要点，即提纲要点化，然后写作成文。
此时我们就必须在大脑中将各种信息点补充完整，适时使用高级词汇和复杂句式。要根据提示将要点表达清楚，使文章的内容完整、饱满、要点齐全，注意适当增加细节。同时注意句子与句子之间，段落与段落之间要有合理的过渡衔接。
3．检查核实，确保无误。
Writing 1
(2016·全国Ⅰ)假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
______________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________
Writing 2
(2016·全国Ⅱ)假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括：
1．主题：环境保护；
2．展览时间；
3．投稿邮箱：注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________
Writing 3
(2016·全国Ⅲ)假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1．表示歉意；2.说明原因；3.另约时间。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
______________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________
Writing 4
(2016·四川高考)某中学生英文报正举办“The Season I Like Best”的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文投稿，内容应包括：
1．你最喜欢的季节；
2．你喜欢该季节的两条理由(如：气候、景色、活动、感受??)。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．题目已为你写好；
3．行文连贯，语篇完整；
4．文中不得透露个人真实信息。
_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
Writing 1
(2015·全国Ⅰ)假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：
1．栏目介绍。
2．稿件内容；
3．稿件长度：约400词；
4．交稿日期：6月28日前。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter，
I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
Writing 2
(2015·全国Ⅱ)假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：
1．出发及返回时间；
2．活动：包饺子、表演节目等。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．结语已为你写好。
Dear Lucy，
______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
Writing 3
(2015·四川高考)假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon 在网上发帖，希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。
1．表达给她提供帮助的意愿；
2．说明你能胜任辅导的理由；
3．给出讲好普通话的两点建议；
4．提出你学习英语的具体需求。
注意：1.词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；
Hi Sharon，
This is Li Xia.I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. _____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Xia
Writing 4
(2015·天津高考)假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津，你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。请根据以下提示，写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris联系，并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。
1．自我介绍；
2．拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等；
3．询问对方的其他需求。
注意：1.词数不少于100；
2．请适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇： 学生会 the Student Union
Dear Chris,
______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely，
Li Jin
Writing 5
(2015·重庆高考)Bookcrossing.com 是一个面向全球的图书分享网站。该网站组织的分享活动有两种参与方式：一是自由分享(wild release)，即把书放在指定地点，由其他参与者自由获取；二是定向分享(controlled release)，即直接传递给另一位参与者。
假设你是李华，请用英文写信申请参加。内容应包括：
·表明写信目的
篇三：2016高考英语作文
课标全国1适用地区：河南、河北、山西、山东、湖南、湖北、江西、广东、安徽、福建。
假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。
注意：
1、词数100左右；
2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I want to tell you something about my plan for the summer vacation and I’d like you to dome a favor.(点名主题：暑假，请帮忙)
To get some working experience, I plan to find a part-time job in a foreign capital company（要点1：想去外资公司兼职）. I have already finished my job application and personal resume（要点2：已写好求职申请和个人简历）.However, my English is bad. Worse still, I don’t even know much about the format of a personal resume (说出自己的困难). So, I’m writing you a letter, hoping to get your guide and
suggestion. You can correct any mistakes yon find in them.(总结，点名写信目的)
Looking forward to your reply（期盼回复）. And I’d be really thankful（表达感激之情）.
Yours,
Li Hua（结束语）
课标全国2适用地区：黑龙江、吉林、辽宁、宁夏、海南、青海、西藏、内蒙古、新疆、云南、贵州、甘肃（最后三个不考听力）。
假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部(photographyclub)将举办国际中学生摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信，请他提供作品。信的内容包括：
1.主题：环境保护；
2.展览时间；
3.投稿邮箱：[email protected]
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
标准范文：
Dear Peter (称呼),
Our schoolphotography club is going to hold an International High School
StudentPhotography Show（你校摄影俱乐部将举办国际中学生摄影展。）. The theme of the show is environmental protection（要点1，主题：环境保护）. It will start from June 15th and last for threehours（要点2，展览时间）. Anystudentwho is interested iswelcome to participate（鼓励投稿）. I know you take good pictures and you’ve always wanted to dosomething for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos onthat theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for
morepeople to see them（引申：点名Peter可以投稿的原因：摄影好，也喜欢为环保做贡献，以及良好的结果）, If you want to join, you can send your photos
[email protected].（要点3，投稿信息）
Hope to hear from yousoon.（提出期望）
Yours,
Li Hua （结束语）
课标全国3适用地区：陕西、广西、重庆。
假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示歉意；
2.说明原因；
3.另约时间。
注意：
1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
标准范文：
Dear Bob,(称呼)
I am sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstorewith you on Friday afternoon（要点1：点题致歉）. I have just found that Ihave to attend an important class meeting afternoon(要点2：说明原因). I hope the change will notcause you too much trouble.（引申）
Shall we go on Saturday morning?（要点3：另约时间） We can set out early so that wewill have more time to read and select books（引申：另约，强调什么事）. If it is convenient for you,let's meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what timesuits you best.（增加细节，给出两种时间原则）I should be availableany time after school next week.（亮明自己下周随时有空，可不能再延期致歉啦） Yours,
Li Hua（结束语）
英语考场作文写作建议
1.仔细审题，简列提纲。
2.扩展提纲，连句成文。
3.过渡词语，衔接紧凑。
4.卷面整洁，爽心悦目。
5.细心复查，确保无误。
附：衔接连贯常用语
表举例示范：for example, in other words, for instance, that is, that is to say等
表因果关系：therefore,so, hence, thus, accordingly, consequently, as a result等
表总结概括：insummary, to sum up, in brief, in short, on the whole, in a word, all in all, inconclusion, as has been noted, on the whole等 表转折让步：unfortunately,though/ although, anyway, but, however, otherwise, still, yet, after all, inspite of, on the contrary, on the other hand, in any case, whatever等
表递进过渡：again,also, worse still, obviously, then, besides, further, furthermore, moreover,next, similarly, after a while, at the same time, in addition, meanwhile,suddenly, later, soon, in the same way, what’s more等
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