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篇一:2017年高考英语书面表达书信

2017年高考英语书面表达书信、电子邮件类 [ 建 议 信 ] 写作攻略1:什么是建议信?

1.建议信是写信人针对某事向收信人提出建议和忠告。

2.建议信有可能是写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点;也可能是写给某个组织和机构,就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。

3.建议信要写出写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由。提出的理由要入情入理,语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得目的明确、简明扼要,具有合理性和说服力。 写作攻略2:建议信写作的注意事项

a. 这类文章一定要符合英语信件的基本格式。 b. 这类文章的基本时态多用现在时和一般将来时。

c. 掌握建议信的语言特点:语气要诚恳,有礼貌;建议内容要详尽具体,不能含糊其辞;可提供的建议通常是多个,因此要注意各条建议之间的衔接。 d. 熟悉建议信的常用句型。 写作攻略3:建议信常用句式

A.建议信开头常用句式 (照应材料,表明意图)

1. After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that … 2. I am very glad to hear that you want to…

3. I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter. 4. I am writing to you in reply to ...

5. You have asked me for my advice on how to…and I'll try to make some suggestions. 6. I am writing to express my views on/ concerning… 7. It's my pleasure to offer you some advice on... B. 建议信正文常用句式(详述建议,合情入理) 1. Have you considered doing.../ So why not do...? 2. Don't you think it more beneficial if you could … 3. I would like to suggest that you (should)… 4. If I were you, I would…

5. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action.

6. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to make a suggestion that you (should)… 7. You'd better do.../ It is/ seems better for you to do...

8. The best way to do sth is to do …/ There is no better way to do sth than to do sth ... 9. How/ What about doing...? 10. What if...?

11. It would be a good idea if...

C.建议信结尾常用句式(归纳总结,提出希望) 1. I believe you will take my advice into consideration. 2. I hope you will find these suggestions useful/ helpful.

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3. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard(在这一点上). 4. I do hope that my ideas will work.

5. In the end, I will be glad if you find these ideas useful.

6. I would be ready to further discuss this matter/ discuss this matter with you in further detail. 7. I am looking forward to your early reply.

8. Let’s keep in touch. I hope to hear good news from you. 9. I hope what's mentioned above might be helpful.

10. I will appreciate your consideration of my advice/suggestions/tips. 11. Please take good consideration of my advice. Thank you.

12. These are my suggestions and I hope they could mean something for a better future of... 写作攻略4:建议信常用常用关联词 1. 表示总结/归纳的过渡词或短语:

in a/ one word, altogether, all in all, on the whole, to sum up/ conclude/ summarize, in conclusion/ summary/ sum, in short

2. 表示递进/ 增补的过渡词或短语 moreover ; what’s more; besides; in addition; also; what’s worse; worse still; even worse; to make matters/ it worse; even; again; as well (as); apart from; too/ either; further more; not only…but also…; and ; neither…nor…;both … and…

3. 表示转折/让步的过渡词或短语: but; however; yet; although; even if/ though; evenso/ not; whatever...; however...; ... as...; despite; in spite of; regardless of; while...; on the one hand, … but on the other hand, …; after all; some…, but others…; otherwise; for one thing..., but for another (thing)... 4. 表示原因的过渡词或短语:

because, since, as, for, now that, because of, thanks to, due to(由于), owing to, in view of, on account of, as a result/ consequence of 5. 表示结果的过渡词或短语:

so, thus, therefore, consequently, accordingly, as a result/ consequence, in consequence, so that, for this reason, the reason for/ why...is that... 6. 表示条件的过渡词或短语:

if, unless , as long as, on condition that..., once... 7. 表示时间的过渡词或短语:

(and) then, after that, next, finally, eventually, later, in the end, recently, at the same time, (in the) meanwhile, at first, at last, from now on, until/ till, afterwards, on/ upon doing, shortly/ soon after, before long, at the beginning of 8. 表示论述顺序关系的过渡词或短语:

first, firstly, second, secondly, third, thirdly, above all, first of all, to begain/ start with, last but not least, lastly 9. 表示解释说明的过渡词或短语:

in other words; that is (to say); namely; ..., which means 10. 表示进行举例说明的过渡词或短语:

for instance, for example, such as, like, examples include..., ...and so on, and/ or the like, take... for example 11. 表示比较对比的过渡词或短语:

instead; instead of; meanwhile; on the contrary; unlike; different from...; as... as...; on the one hand, … and on the other hand, …; some…, and/ while others…; ... while...; for one thing..., and for another (thing)...; similarly; equally; similar to...; in the same way/ manner 12. 表示强调事实的过渡词或短语:

in fact/ reality/ truth/ practice, to tell you the truth, to be honest/ frank/ sure, as a matter of fact, honestly speaking, actually, above all, after all, anyway, anyhow, certainly/ surely, indeed, really, especially, in particular, truly, importantly, most important, obviously, only/ just/ simply/ merely, without doubt/ out of question 13. 表示选择的过渡词或短语: either... or..., or, or else, otherwise 14. 表示表目的的过渡词或短语:

for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to, with the purpose of 建议信写作范例

假设你是某报社编辑,最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难,这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示,写一篇回给李华的建议信,帮他解决困难,促进学习。建议内容:

1. 不要灰心,保持良好心态; 2. 掌握学习方法; 3. 培养对英语的兴趣爱好。 注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数; 第一步:审题

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第二步:构思---建议信结构及内容要点

? 三段式:

第一段: 点明主题:表明写作意图,(有时要简单介绍自己)。 第二段: 陈述事实,提出建议,给出理由(是什么,为什么,怎么样) 第三段: 总结全文,表明希望 建议信重点 第二段:

⑴ 说明建议的内容;(是什么) ⑵ 提出具体建议的原因;(为什么) ⑶ 指出采纳建议的益处。(怎么样)

注意事项:语言要委婉、礼貌,顾及对方感受。 适当运用模板 Dear Li Hua,

I've received your letter, saying+ 你碰到的问题. I’m sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem. My suggestions are as follows.

Firstly, ____________, because________. Secondly, you'd better________________, because_________. Thirdly, you’d better _________________. Only in this way can you __________. What’s more, _____. I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. Best wishes.

Yours, Dear Li Hua,

I've received your letter, saying you have some difficulties in learning English. I'm sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.

My suggestions are as follows. Firstly, you should listen to the teachers carefully in the class. Secondly, the best way to learn English is reading it well and knowing the meanings of it. Thirdly, you can speak English with your classmates and teachers, which can improve your listening and speaking abilities. What's more, the most important advice is reading English books before the class and after the class. I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you.

Yours,

xxx 其他模板1 Dear___,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to ____./ I know that ____ from____.

Here are a few suggestions/ Here is some advice that/ on_____. First, it is important to _____. Then/ Second/ Also, ____. Besides/ In addition/ Furthermore, it should be a good idea to ____. I am sure that/ I hope that____.

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3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Best wishes.

Thanks for your consideration. I’m looking forward to/ Looking forward to _____.Yours,______ 2

Dear _____,

I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to(引出主题).

Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to As to , I suggest (有时根据需要具体到某一反面). In addition,(其他建议). I'm I'm looking forward to (表达愿望).

a good idea to . You can also . () sure (预测可能的结果,给对方以行动的信心和决心).

Yours sincerely , Li Hua

3. Dear____,

You have asked me for my advice on how to..., and I'll try to make some suggestions here.

In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: First, ... If you do this, ... Second, ... This way, ... And last, ... By doing this, ...I hope you'll find these ideas useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with you.

Yours,XXX 写作训练1

假设你是的李华,下面是你校英语报第一期第二版的主要内容。请你给编辑写一封信,对该版内容发表评论并提出改进建议。

版面主要内容:体育新闻、学习方法、疑难问答等。

写作训练2

假设你是的李华,最近你发现学校里的浪费现象非常严重。请给英语读写园地(English Reading and Writing Space)的编辑投稿反映该现象,并提出自己的建议。

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Dear editors,

I am Li Hua, a student in class One, Grade One.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely, Lihua Yours, Li Hua 写作训练 3

假设你是学生李华,你的英国朋友Tom目前正在努力学习汉语,但在学习中遇到了一些困难,因此他在几天前给你发电子邮件求助,询问怎样才能学好汉语。请根据以下要点给他回复一封邮件: 1.感谢他之前对你英语学习的建议和帮助; 2.介绍汉语语言的特点以及学习汉语的方法; 3.邀请他暑假期间来中国,交流语言学习经验。 注意:

1.词数:100左右;

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Yours sincerely,Li Hua

附:请求信模板 Dear___________,

I am writing to formally request to___________(请求的内容)

The reason for_____ is that______(给出原因). I_____, so I_____(给出细节)

I would also like to request______(提出进一步的要求). I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused. Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at _______(电话号码). I look forward to a favorable reply. / I would appreciate it if you can give me a favorable reply.

Yours sincerely,Li Ming Homework

第二节 书面表达 (满分25分)

假定你是李华,你校图书馆最近新设了一个英语阅览室,很受学生欢迎。请用英语给阅览室管理老师Peter Chen写封信。信的主要内容包括:

1.阅览室给学生带来的好处(至少两点); 2.阅览室仍需改进的建议(至少两点); 注意:

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Best wishes!

As far as

I know, most of the students are fond of this

section because it provides us with a lot of news both from the school and around the world. What's more, it gives us sports news, as well as tips on how to study. My favorite part , though, is Ask and Answer, since our questions can be answered by teachers in time. It also helps us communicate with our teachers and schoolmates, which is of great help to our growth.

Despite the good it has done to us, I would still like to make some suggestions. The section would attract more readers if you were to add more entertainment contents, such as hunorous stories or jokes which would make it more lovely and interesting.

I'm looking forward to reading more interesting stories in our English newspapers.Yours,Li Hua

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Dear editors,

I am Li Hua, a student in Class One, Grade One.

Recently, I have found that the waste on our campus is getting serious, such as the waste of water, food and electrical energy. Faced with these phenomena(现象), I really feel worried. So here is some advice I hope will help. English Reading and Writing Space is a good medium to advocate(倡议) that saving is a traditional virtue. So would you publish more instructive articles on this topic first? Then, some activities such as holding debates or seeing movies about the phenomenon will help students get aware of the harm of wasting and realize the importance of saving. Do you agree with me? I am looking forward to your reply.

Dear Tom,

I’m so glad to receive your last letter. I can’t thank you enough for your advice and help in my English study, due to which I’ve made great progress in learning English.

As for your language study, I’m concerned to know that you are facing some difficulties when studying Chinese. I’m willing to offer you some help. As you know, Chinese is so flexible that you need to pay attention to the different meanings of a word or phrase in different situations. Besides, it is difficult for foreigners to write Chinese characters, especially for the beginners. So I advise you to learn some oral Chinese first. Then you may begin to try writing some simple Chinese characters. Finally, there is one point for you to remember: practice makes perfect.

Another suggestion is that you should experience the native Chinese language environment in person. How about coming to China during the summer holiday? We can talk about our experience in language learning with each other. Best wishes!

as English newspapers and magazines here. The reading room becomes increasingly popular because it benefits us a lot. On the one hand, it is convenient for us to eich our lives and broaden our minds by reading; on the other hand, it helps develop our interest in studying English.

Despite the good it has done to us, I’d like to make some suggestions. Have you considered opening it all weekdays, instead of just on Friday afternoon? Besides, the limited number of books available is better to be enlarged. I hope you will find these suggestions useful and thank you for your time.

篇二:从书信大赛看今日作文教学

现今生活中,电话、网络已经成为主要的通信方式。虽然这些现代通讯工具的出现使人们传递信息更为便捷,但它们仍无法取代书信的重要地位。书信是中华民族的传统文化,是人与人之间感情寄托的摇篮,是在快餐时代中充满人情味的沟通方式,所以我们需要书信这个古老而又极富情意的交流方式。古往今来,书信都被视为表达和传递思想与情感的重要桥梁,烽火连三月,家书抵万金,杜甫的《春望》道出书信的珍贵。但在某大学组织的一次以感恩为主题的书信征稿中,经审阅发现书信的写作状况令人堪忧。笔者采取随机抽样法抽取100份参赛作品进行整理,归纳出学生在书信撰写中存在的问题,并针对存在的问题提出三点应对建议。一、书信写作中存在的问题(一)格式不规范书信作为日常实用文体,有其固定的格式,这一格式是在长期使用过程中形成的一种约定俗成的规范。一般的书信由称谓、问候语、正文、祝语和落款五部分组成,在随机抽取的100份感恩信中,格式不规范的约 现今生活中,电话、网络已经成为主要的通信方式。虽然这些现代通讯工具的出现使人们传递信息更为便捷,但它们仍无法取代书信的重要地位。

篇三:2017年高考语文作文素材

2017年高考语文作文素材

一.人物类

孙膑

性格:智慧,能屈能伸

事件:庞涓嫉妒,屈尊装疯, 围魏救赵,田忌赛马,评价:孙子膑脚,兵法修列

逾伯牙与钟子期—知音,友谊

摔碎瑶琴凤尾寒,子期不在对谁弹!春风满面皆朋友,欲觅知音难上难。韩愈

不塞不流,不止不行。 (《原道》)

业精于勤,荒于嬉;行成于思,毁于随。(《 进学解》)

天街小雨润如酥,草色遥看近却无。最是一年春好处,绝胜烟柳满皇都。(《早春呈水部张十八员外》)

书山有路勤为径,学海无涯苦作舟。(韩愈治学名联)

曹操

性格:聪明透顶、愚不可及,狡猾奸诈、坦率真诚,豁达大度、疑神疑鬼,宽宏大量、心胸狭窄。大家风范、小人嘴脸,英雄气派、儿女情怀,阎王脾气、菩萨心肠。(易中天)唯才是举,海纳百川

名句:周公吐哺,天下归心。

日月之行,若出其中;星汉灿烂,若出其里。

老骥伏枥,志在千里;

评价:往事越千年,魏武挥鞭,东临碣石有遗篇。(毛泽东)清平之奸贼,乱世之英雄。——《后汉书》

横槊赋诗,固一世之雄也.——《赤壁赋》

事件:官渡之战之后,曹操缴获了袁绍大量的图书,资料,文件,书信,就发现其中有自己的人写给袁绍的信,按照一般人的反应,这是通敌的证据,这是背叛的证据,应该把它拿出来,一个一个按图索骥,把那些叛徒,把那些二心的,把那些动摇份子都给我揪出来,而曹操没有。曹操发现这些一堆书信,看都不看,立即下令,全部烧毁,曹操做得很漂亮,当时很多人不理

解,就问曹操,为什么把这么重要的证据都毁掉了,因为曹操很清楚,他是以弱胜强,老实说,自己心里都没底,何况大家呢,这勾结袁绍又不是一个二个,三个五个,可能是几十个,上百个,这都清算不过来,何必要清算呢,这个人情,曹操做得很好,曹操当着全部人的面把这些证明全部烧毁,让大家放心,跟着曹某,只要衷诚,以前的事我不知道。

曹操很会装糊涂,装糊涂才能宽容人,宽容人才能得人心,得人心才能得天下。

项羽

性格:胸怀大志,士可杀不可辱,忠贞于英雄之名,忠贞于大丈夫之气.自矜功伐

事件:破釜沉舟,霸王别姬,兵败垓下

诗句:力拔山兮气盖世,时不利兮骓不逝,骓不逝兮可奈何?虞兮虞兮奈若何!

?学文不过能记住姓名,学武不过能以一抵百,籍要学便学万人敌!?评价:?生当作人杰,死亦为鬼雄。至今思项羽,不肯过江东。?(李清照《夏日绝句》

?江东子弟多才俊, 卷土重来未可知。?(杜牧《题乌江亭》)

?项羽拔山盖世之雄,喑呜叱咤,千人皆废,为什么身死东城,为天下人笑?他的失败原因‘妇人之仁,匹夫之勇’两句话包括尽了。当其败北之时,如果渡过乌江,卷土重来,尚不知鹿死谁手。而项羽向天长叹:‘籍与江东子弟八千人渡江而西,今无一人还,纵江东父兄怜我而王,我何面见之?纵不言,籍独无愧于心?’英雄一世却没能战胜自己的自尊心!放弃了一线生机。?

刘邦

性格:豁达大度,从谏如流

事件:约法三章,赢得民心;项庄舞剑,意在沛公;四面楚歌,瓦解军心;人为刀俎,我为鱼肉;明修栈道,暗度陈仓

评价:高祖初起,始自徒中。言从泗上,即号沛公。啸命豪杰,奋发材雄。彤云郁砀,素灵告丰。龙变星聚,蛇分径空。项氏主命,负约弃功。王

我巴蜀,实愤于衷。三秦既北,五兵遂东。氾水即位,咸阳筑宫。威加四海,还歌大风。——《史记索隐》

唐太宗

评价:不拘一格用人;知人善任,虚怀若谷;轻徭薄赋,劝课农桑魏征

品质:忠心耿耿,善于直谏,强调?兼听则明,偏听则暗?(见《谏太宗十思疏》)

评价:夫以铜为镜,可以正衣冠;以古为镜,可以知兴替;以人为镜,可以明得失。我常保此三镜,以防己过。今魏征殂逝,遂亡一镜矣。(唐太宗)李煜

评价:李煜才华横溢,工书善画,能诗擅词,通音晓律,是被后人千古传诵的一代词人;本无心争权夺利,一心向往归隐生活的李煜能登上王位完全是个意外,无奈命运弄人,也是刻于历史卷宗上的亡国之君,他痛恨自己生在帝王家。功过事非,已成历史之轨迹……

作个才人真绝代, 可怜薄命作君王

词句.:一重山,两重山,山远天高烟水寒,相思枫叶丹。 菊花开,菊花残,塞雁高飞人未还,一帘风月闲。《长相思》

独自莫凭栏,无限江山,别时容易见时难。流水落花春去也,天上人间。《浪淘沙》

雕栏玉砌应犹在,只是朱颜改。问君能有几多愁,恰似一江春水向东流。《虞美人》

林花谢了春红,太匆匆,无奈朝来寒雨晚来风。胭脂泪,相留醉(留人醉),几时重,

自是人生长恨水长东。《相见欢》

无言独上西楼,月如钩,寂寞梧桐深院锁清秋。剪不断,理还乱,是离愁,别是一番滋味在心头。《相见欢》

多少恨,昨夜梦魂中。还似旧时游上苑,车如流水马如龙;花月正春风!《望江南》

战国四君子(孟尝君,平原君,信陵君,春申君)

孟尝君:鸡鸣狗盗

平原君:毛遂自荐

信陵君:尊礼侯生,窃符救赵

春申君:受命赴秦,辅国持权,丧命荆门

共同特点:明智忠信,宽厚爱人,以礼贤下士、招致宾客、辅佐治国而闻于世

竹林七贤(嵇康 、阮籍 、山涛 、向秀 、刘伶 、王戎 及阮咸 )嵇康:在人生哲学上,他的主张是:非汤武而薄周礼,越名教而任自然。个性凌厉傲岸,旷逸不羁。

阮籍:对礼法之士?青白眼?视之;阮公邻家少妇有美色,当垆酤酒。阮与王安丰常从妇饮酒,阮醉,便眠其妇侧,夫始殊疑之,伺察终无他意;兵家女有才色,未嫁而死,籍不识其父兄,径往哭之,尽哀而还。

评价:放浪形骸,放荡不羁,崇尚自然,不拘礼法

赞诗:心是空的 骨节却是那么坚硬 结庐于深山处 自得其乐 世界也就远了 即使叶子如何沉默 风一旦来了 那也片片如刀 似剑......什么乱世佳人 抛之脑后 抚琴 喝酒 写诗 也不啻为英雄

李白

李白实在是中国诗人中的游侠。这位伟大的漂泊者用他的双脚和诗笔丰富了大唐的山水他的大笔横扫,狂飙突进,于是,洞庭烟波、赤壁风云、蜀道猿啼、浩荡江河,全都一下子飞扬起来。在诗中,诗人灵动飞扬,豪气纵横,像天上的云气;他神游八极,自由驰骋,像原野上的奔驰的骏马。在诗里,诗人一扫世俗的尘埃,完全恢复了他仙人的姿态:上穷碧落下黄泉。他的浪漫、癫狂、爱恨情仇,寂寞与痛苦、梦与醒,他的豪气义气,他的漂泊,全都达于极端。

作品名句:长风破浪会有时,直挂云帆济沧海。 《行路难》天生我材必有用,千金散尽还复来。 《乐府·将进酒》

桃花潭水深千尺,不及汪伦送我情。 《赠汪伦》

安能摧眉折腰事权贵,使我不得开心颜。 《梦游天姥吟留别》

评价:酒入豪肠,七分酿成了月光 余下的三分啸成剑气 绣口一吐就是半个盛唐 (余光中)

一生傲岸 狂放不羁 达不足贵 穷不足悲 藐视权贵 愤世嫉俗 放浪形骸 热情奔放 不屈己,不干人

几乎每一个人在孩童时代都会稚嫩的,奶声奶气地吟诵:?床前明月光,疑是地上霜?;在上小学以后,孩子们都会齐声朗诵:?飞流直下三千尺,疑是银河落九天.?在我们意气风发,恰同学少年时,我们都会说:?君不见,黄河之水天上来,奔流到海不复回;君不见,高堂明镜悲白发,朝如青丝暮成雪。?

他要是想上天,他可以说:?太白与我语,为我开天关。?他要是想去咸阳,他可以说:?狂风吹我心,西挂咸阳树。?他要是高兴,他说:?人生飘忽百年内,且须酣畅万古情.?他可以说:?且乐生前一杯酒,何须身后千载名。?他要是伤心,他说:?五花马,千金裘,呼儿将出换美酒,与尔同销万古愁!?(乐是酣畅万古情,悲是同销万古愁)他要是形容自己发愁,就是?白发三千丈,缘愁似个长。?他要是送朋友,就是?我寄愁心与明月,随君直到夜郎西。?如果朋友送李白,他会说:?桃花潭水深千尺,不及汪伦送我情。?

李白告诉我们,有的时候流浪也是一种归宿:?万里无主人,一身独为客。?李贺说?不须浪饮丁督户,世上英雄本无主?,真正的天地英雄是没有君王的,李白就是这样一个自我放逐的人,三年的宫中生活对他来说并不过是个穿越,而真正相伴终生的是美酒,明月,是放荡不羁,是?不屈己,不干人?。(摘自于丹教授的一次演讲)

杨修

评价:才思敏捷,聪颖过人,舌辨之士,恃才放旷,得到曹操赏识器重,委以?总知外内?的主薄,成为丞相曹操身边的一位高级幕僚谋士,理应算得上一位重臣。在发生了阔门、一盒酥、曹操梦中杀人、吴质等事件后,可惜,聪明反被聪明误,曹操对杨修心中已暗存芥蒂,暗暗忌之戒备之,直到后来杨修又暗中插手废立太子之事,引起曹操极度不满和嫉恨。

事件:鸡肋者,食之无味,弃之可惜。

屈原

品格:热爱祖国、志洁行廉,刚正不阿,坚持理想,太过执着(反面用,渔父曰:?沧浪之水清兮,可以濯吾缨;沧浪之水浊兮,可以濯吾足。?)


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